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cw1 发表于 2024-6-9 23:57   只看TA 21楼
速食社保文写的很棒啊，仙子和异兽的反差赛高了，不过这篇总感觉有些地方意犹未尽，感觉中间能写出很多东西吧像大佬说的反杀不成反被干啊或者加入外来人知晓女主身份的视角，最好再是仰慕女主的同辈或者后辈，来目睹女主凄惨现状道心破碎，大大有考虑未来将这部作品修订充实一下内容呢，很有继续发展空间的
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