大件 发表于 2011-2-17 03:01   全显示 1楼
此章關於訝子的篇章相當少
但作者可以於後續以倒述形式重新描繪訝子三日來的生活
細緻地描述一步一步墮落的同時
加插情節的推進, 從而令文章更見立體感
既可以令章節的推進更加流暢
亦可以令調教訝子的肉戲更具觀賞性
從而達致逐步的墮落
亦不會因為過長的肉戲引致"色欲疲勞"
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