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[离任作者] 【前妻凶猛】（18-19章）

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本书写的真好,就是感觉老曹的结局良突兀,让人一下子好难适应.查理的突然冒出,感觉很牵强.主人公回家后,心理变化描述不够瞧.我感觉璐肯定让小唐操过了.两个人本来就发生过性关系.两三天独处.不可能不发生点什么啊.更何况小唐还一直很迷恋璐的肉体呢?
还想楼主能多写写男女主人公的心理变化,尤其是操屄时的心情描述.说的不好,还请楼主多多谅解.
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  • 梦魇过后 金币 +5 说的挺好，无需谅解！ 2009-7-24 07:40

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