打桩机 发表于 2023-9-21 13:25   全显示 1楼
兄妹日常写的很有意思，俗套的鬼马妹妹捉弄老实哥哥，但耐不住牛牛爱看。白依依在床上这么风骚明显是个中老手，只是但从这段肉戏来看缺乏性魅力，有点像po18文里肉戏的感觉，个人以为还是可以适当增加对女方的描写，还是很期待妹妹擦枪哥哥走火的桥段的。
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